song - untitled

alright, here are a bunch of lyrics for a song about joy. let me know what you think, what goes where, what should be gotten the frizzick rid of, etc.

don't let me lose this joy
when you ask me to dance
i never was one for dancing
but when you ask, how can i say no?
eyes close, my hand in yours
i can't breathe
i can't speak
i just dance

joy taken over, you lead me to simplicity
too bright to have seen earlier
but now i've heard enough to know i'm deaf
i've learned enough to know nothing more at all
and i let you lead
this dance of ours
'til the music stops

chorus (maybe)
just a sip of your joy
and i'm beside myself
just a glace up above
and i'm free
just a wiggle, just a breath,
just a simple thought of you
and i'm gone

(now for some segments)

a) that song was right
there's nothing gonna take my joy
you could bind me blind me
still you'll find me
dancin'
my arms are raised
singing songs of praise
my eyes are shut
a smile's on my face
i'm so amazed
just one thing to say
i love ya love ya love ya love ya

b) i wiggle my toes
and take a deep breath
and move my arms
and shout real loud
i'm alive! i'm alive!
what more could i ask for?

c) each breath i take
i know you give
knowing full well i won't do
much good with it

d) my thoughts drift
but i think
and so i am
and if i am
then you are
and that's good
and i'm good
for you're good
and i'm yours
and so the joy returns

e) can't ask for more than this
a breath, a life, this joy tonight
it might be cold
i might be worn
but no matter
for i am i
and that i's alive
and he's gonna use his life
to strive to seek to find
to die to all that i abide
until the sin subsides
the guise of good inside
decide tonight
that i with you can
fly!

by no means do a-e need to stay like they are, they could be combined, left out, anything. let me know which parts of which parts sound okay, and what the chorus should be, and any other thoughts whatsoever. coo.